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« on: March 27, 2005, 08:48:45 PM » |
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comments comments... even if it's a bad comment, i still accept.... (help me to improve) http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y2/monkeeyuki_hime159/hyuuga.jpgjust realized that hinata's eyebrow is too high up... (sweatdrop) more to come... my photobucket suddenly decided to be stupid so i'll have to upload others tommorow... |
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DayDreamerz
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« Reply #1 on: March 27, 2005, 11:38:19 PM » |
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Well, if you're worried about dial up users you could post the link instead of the picture. That way only those who want to see it have to bear with the download time. :twisted:
Just an opinion -~> Mind shading the eyes?
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« Reply #2 on: March 28, 2005, 07:34:27 AM » |
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gomen.. i've changed it to its link... the eyes are supposed to be white... can't shade them anymore ^^ here's one more...  sumthing's wrong with the head (too small??)..... the hands too.... and the mouth.... (sweatdrop).. need to adjust this back... |
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« Reply #3 on: March 28, 2005, 06:31:41 PM » |
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Your Neji looks fine (sekushi in fact XD)
Hinata..hmm.. first thing I noticed is of course the eyebrow.. and that's because you've mentioned it anyway.. And one think that doesn't seems right is the chin IMO.. and you should go lighter (I mean your hands.. don't really hold tight to the pencil) when stroking her hair.. her fringe looks so 'static'.. And the Natsumi one.. I think face is kinda off.. esp. the lower part.. I think the mouth is too low and the chin is too long? left hand too.. but anyway.. I can't really critisize other people draw hands because I myself never able to draw hand properly XD
sorry if you feel offended *hugs*
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« Reply #4 on: March 28, 2005, 06:35:54 PM » |
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Yeah... the mouth is too low... And I think its shape is wrong for the expression...
The hands look fine to me though. :wink:
But the shoes... are they too big?
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« Reply #5 on: March 28, 2005, 07:18:01 PM » |
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But the shoes... are they too big? ..... i dunno.... is it abnormally big??... whippy>> sankyuu for the comments... btw, my hands shake so much so i need to get hold to the pencil to lessen the shaking... my teacher once ask me if i'm suffering parkinson... but, i'll try to improve next time... |
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« Reply #6 on: March 29, 2005, 06:17:25 AM » |
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well for me i think its beter than mine huhuhuhu... the legs seem ok for me since some of the manga artist likes to shape the leg a little bit bigger than their body. the hand looks fine...the posture looks ok. doesnt really look odd for me. if u make the chest a little bit errrr higher hehehehehe :twisted:  |
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« Reply #7 on: March 29, 2005, 03:43:06 PM » |
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That character reminds me of Mega Tokyo style.
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« Reply #8 on: April 02, 2005, 03:09:24 AM » |
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for the neji and hinata....just like what the other said. just wanna add, something is missing but i dunno what, it feels somewhat empty. other than that A-OK!!!! *applause*
for the natsumi...seems a bit blur... so are my eyes (i'll soon be blurryeyes the second if i keep working in front of the pc). but the stroke has a great resemblance to mine during my upper form years...( u r not in anyway my clone r u? j/k, hehe). 'meine meinung' had already been spoken but i had two more to add. no 1: i think its better if u lowered the nose a bit ( the shape matches, just lower it) no 2: do you use symmetry line to draw the face? there seems to be one for the eye. if u do, move the chin towards it a little.
my no 2 comment is relative to ur choice, wheter u are going to change the face's shape or not.
hope none of my comments offend u. GANBATE, monkeeyumi-san!!!
p/s: i had a similar sketch regarding the face, but sorry i dun have a scanner and im not sure where i put my sketch book - hope my mom didnt throw it away yet!!!
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« Reply #9 on: April 02, 2005, 07:25:57 AM » |
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thnx for all the comments given... i'll try to improve... here's another one... currently all my fanarts are naruto (they're easier to refer to) but i'll be drawing other anime characters soon... http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y2/monkeeyuki_hime159/kakashi1.jpgpls ignore the crooked katana, the lame folds around the neck and fake blood effects... XD XD but if u have solutions to fix all of that, tell me.. ok?? gomen for the messy-ness??? |
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